These are my two front covers. Ones a preliminary (Manorzine) and the other one is my final draft (Xclusive) as you can see there is a significant difference between the two. The preliminary front cover only has one sell line and sloppy use off photoshop and limited use of typography whereas the final draft has a variety of typography and a good use and contrast of colours and a variety of sell lines that entice the reader. My preliminary task on the other hand hasn't got things like a price or features on it and the dull use of one colour which doesnt really go with the theme of the model used on it. The photography could have been better as well as it isn't clear. The background also doesn't stand out as much as it should. The model needs to have taken up more space as it is supposed to be the centre of attention and grab the readers eye. It should also have a issue number or edition style. As you can see the final draft is a lot better then my preliminary task and also has the typical conventions of a rap magazine. I have learnt a lot from my preliminary task and have improved a lot.
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